an acrostic by Oonah V Joslin
Geese fly south, a honking
Arrowhead. Overhead I hear wings.
Robin eats the apple core. Sings ‘more’.
Damp composting worms find
Eden; grown and tangled in a day.
Next door’s cat is never far away.
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OonahV Joslin is Managing Editor of www.everydaypoets.com and you can find links to lots of her work here.
The Pygmy Giant 
#1 by Cath Barton on January 25, 2012 - 9:17 am
Nice one Oonah!
#2 by ramsea on January 25, 2012 - 9:57 am
The ending was a nice surprise.
#3 by jennifer walmsley on January 25, 2012 - 11:13 am
Lovely, visual acrostic. The beginning is gentle and then at the end it makes the reader realise that danger always lurks despite beautiful surroundings.
#4 by Sandra on January 25, 2012 - 7:13 pm
Nice one Oonah!