by Rebecca Parfitt
Out into the wet smear of the Southbank
under heavy dirty rain we paused to kiss
then scattered like birds from our embrace
to run into the sheltered avenue of trees
shining blue white with lights
we ran underneath the bridge
through rising puddles
past the busker who was singing our song
the huddled skaters
and the homeless beneath the arches
but too late
our chests heaving and cheeks red
the train left us behind on the platform
winking and flashing electric sparks
out into the smudged darkness of Saturday night air
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Rebecca Parfitt was recently shortlisted for the Bridport Prize 2011. She facilitates creative writing workshops in Cardiff.
#1 by ramseaLeah on July 27, 2011 - 12:57 pm
Excellent—could picture this vividly.
#2 by E A M Harris on August 10, 2011 - 2:26 pm
A very clear word-picture. I loved it