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Bluetack

by Max Wallis

I have a lonely place
in my skull, at the back
all covered in bluetack.

From where I’ve taken down
photos of you.

Max Wallis is due to start a masters in Creative Writing at Manchester, and writes something every day here.

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This entry was posted on August 25, 2010, 9:00 am and is filed under Poetry. You can follow any responses to this entry through RSS 2.0. You can leave a response, or trackback from your own site.

  1. #1 by S de Assaf on August 25, 2010 - 9:08 am

    Short, yet full of pathos. Liked it immensely.

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  2. #2 by Jennifer walmsley on August 25, 2010 - 9:37 am

    Beautiful. So much said in so few words.

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  3. #3 by Nickie@Typecast on August 26, 2010 - 2:49 pm

    Sometimes, fewer words say so much more.

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  4. #4 by Emma on August 27, 2010 - 12:16 pm

    Great stuff, Max.

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  5. #5 by gloryia on August 30, 2010 - 4:25 pm

    So much said in so few words – great little poem – Gloryia

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  6. #6 by James E.S. on August 31, 2010 - 12:24 am

    Inspired by the poster above – this is glorious!

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  7. #7 by Max Wallis on August 31, 2010 - 1:56 pm

    Thank you everyone :) x

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  8. #8 by Teresa on September 2, 2010 - 7:48 pm

    Really like this. Really do.

    Reply

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