Comments on: That Summer http://thepygmygiant.com/2012/09/25/that-summer/ bigger on the inside Mon, 20 May 2013 13:50:17 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ By: Jon Doyle http://thepygmygiant.com/2012/09/25/that-summer/#comment-3738 Mon, 31 Dec 2012 10:07:30 +0000 http://thepygmygiant.com/?p=1949#comment-3738 Thanks for the feedback, I appreciate any/all opinions as I’m only just starting out doing this sort of thing. I’m glad you enjoyed it overall!

]]> By: anthonyjohnward http://thepygmygiant.com/2012/09/25/that-summer/#comment-3481 Tue, 25 Sep 2012 12:32:03 +0000 http://thepygmygiant.com/?p=1949#comment-3481 I especially liked the line “for once in my life managing to anchor myself in the present.” Something I find almost impossible to do these days.

]]> By: circlesunderstreetlights http://thepygmygiant.com/2012/09/25/that-summer/#comment-3479 Tue, 25 Sep 2012 07:59:54 +0000 http://thepygmygiant.com/?p=1949#comment-3479 I really enjoyed this – the imagery was wonderful and managed to evoke summer, love and an undercurrent of loss. Genuinely lovely piece.

One thing I would say, in terms of CC, is that I found the repetition and formatting at the end a little twee. I would actually get rid of the last line and subsume the penultimate one into the one before it, which is just so stunning it deserves to be the final line (imo!)

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